*bows to requests*
Here it is, Chapter 7 of Click. This isn't the end - there's one more to go.
I would love you guys forever if you read/reviewed for me. Really really.
TTYL,
Love,
believeinthegods
xxxx
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4 comments:
amazing story. pleaaaaaaaaaaaase put up the next chapter! its torture! ;)
I'm so glad the chapter is up! I really liked Paul and his interaction with Percy--I laughed outloud at the line "the problem lifted his head." And the overall plot is fun and interesting--all too often in life, it is the unexpected tragedies that sober us and show us who really loves us. My only constructive criticism would be that--in U.S. hospitals, at least--you could never just walk into an ER or Cardiac ICU without being given permission by a doctor and probably buzzed in, so having Annabeth running from bed to bed felt a bit unrealistic to me. Also, a doctor wouldn't ask questions like that before a surgery to a self-claimed family member he just randomly happened to run into. I realize that had to happen for Annabeth to feel guilty, but...yeah. I'm being picky, I know. Overall though, I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the last chapter.
-Jill
Hi guys :) Just to reply to Jill and Anonymous - thank you guys for checking out the story, it means so much, truly.
To Jill - thanks for pointing out about the hospital thing! To be honest, here in the UK you can pretty much stroll in and out of hospitals from ward to ward, to be honest, our security is kind of...non-existent... :D But I appreciate you pointing that out for me, thank you!
Love,
believeinthegods
xxxx
I loved the part with Percy and Paul! It seemed so realistic... I know this sounds lame, but I can understand how Percy feels perfectly. :) I've been having a hard time recently, so this was spot-on. Please put up the next chapter! I really need to know the ending. Ah, I love happy endings. :)
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